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How can we tell a screenplay came from an amateur?
- Malformed scene headings.
- Unnecessary lead-ins (e.g. “we see”, “the camera shows”).
- Excessive description of trivial and/or irrelevant detail.
- Camera and directing instructions.
- Unplayable emotions (e.g. memories).
- Background information otherwise not conveyed by the visuals.
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